IELTS WRITING · 强化段
课程:L6-L10
核心词汇:★标注

雅思写作 强化段

Writing Enhancement · Lessons 6-10 · L6-L10

LESSONS L6 - L10
TASK 1 图表作文
TASK 2 议论文
VOCAB 核心词汇
PART 01

报告类题型 · 讲解

题型4:问题与解决措施(点击卡片展开两种写法详解)

QUESTION TYPE · 题型说明

报告类题目通常以 What are the causes/problems? How to solve/address? 提问,要求分析现象的原因或问题,并提出相应解决措施。重点在于:根本/主要。

笔记

METHOD · 两种写法对比

PART 02

范文与真题

2 篇范文分步揭示 + 2 道真题练习 + 2 篇考官范文(点击展开/翻牌)

ESSAY 1 · 写法1 · 青少年犯罪
青少年犯罪的原因与惩罚方式
In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?
笔记
TEACHER · 讲解
本篇采用"写法1:原因措施各自成段"。点击"下一步"逐段揭示,注意每段的写作要点。
STEP 1 · INTRODUCTION · 引言段
There has been a notable increase in criminal activities committed by children and teenagers. The essay will elaborate on the reasons for this rise in youth crime and the countermeasures.
要点:改写题目(committing more crimes → notable increase in criminal activities),概括文章内容(reasons + countermeasures)。
STEP 2 · CAUSES · 原因分析
This phenomenon is not easily attributed to a single cause, but rather a complex interplay of various factors. Firstly, the influence of the media and social media cannot be overstated. Children and teenagers are constantly exposed to violent and criminal behavior through movies, TV shows, and the internet, which may desensitize them to the consequences of such actions. Moreover, family structures and parenting styles have undergone significant changes in recent decades. The breakdown of traditional family units and the increasing prevalence of single-parent households may lead to a lack of supervision and guidance for children. Additionally, the pressure and competitiveness of modern society often lead to stress and anxiety among young people, which can sometimes manifest as criminal behavior.
要点:用 complex interplay of various factors 引出多因论,Firstly / Moreover / Additionally 层次分明,涵盖媒体、家庭、社会压力三方面。
STEP 3 · MEASURES · 措施段
In addressing the punishment of young offenders, it is crucial to strike a balance between ensuring public safety and promoting rehabilitation. While it is important to ensure that justice is served and that the victims are protected, we must also recognize that these young offenders are still developing and have the potential for reform. Strict punishment alone is often not enough to address the underlying issues that lead to criminal behavior. Instead, a rehabilitative approach should be adopted. This involves providing support and guidance to help young offenders understand the consequences of their actions and develop a sense of responsibility. Community service, counseling, and educational programs can all play a role in this process. Additionally, family involvement is crucial in ensuring that young offenders receive the necessary support and supervision at home.
要点:strike a balance 平衡句型,rehabilitative approach 核心措施词,具体措施列举 community service / counseling / educational programs。
STEP 4 · CONCLUSION · 结论段
In conclusion, the increasing trend of criminal behavior among children and teenagers is attributed to several underlying causes and it is essential to adopt a reasonable punishment strategy.
要点:is attributed to 归因结构,adopt a reasonable strategy 总结措施,呼应引言。
ESSAY 2 · 写法2 · 城市问题
大城市年轻人面临的问题与解决
As major cities continue to grow, so do the problems. What are the problems that young people living in cities are facing with? How could these problems be solved?
笔记
TEACHER · 讲解
本篇采用"写法2:每段问题+措施对应"。三个问题(就业竞争、住房昂贵、健康问题),每段问题后紧跟措施。
PROBLEM 1 · 就业竞争
fierce competition in the labor market
▸ 点击翻牌查看措施
  • 问题:人才涌入,公司选择多,求职者失业压力大
  • 措施1:government encourage self-employment
  • 措施2:job-seekers improve competitiveness by vocational courses
PROBLEM 2 · 住房昂贵
overly expensive accommodation
▸ 点击翻牌查看措施
  • 问题:租房买房昂贵,市中心房价飙升
  • 措施1:government provide subsidies on renting/buying
  • 措施2:locate houses in suburbs 而非市中心
  • 措施3:utilize social media to search housing options
PROBLEM 3 · 健康问题
"old people" diseases among the young
▸ 点击翻牌查看措施
  • 问题:心血管疾病、肥胖年轻化,身心受损
  • 措施1:government tax chemical industries causing pollution
  • 措施2:young individuals keep regular exercise + healthy diet
CONCLUSION · 结论
varied and complex problems
▸ 点击翻牌查看结句
  • In conclusion, the issues facing young individuals, namely fierce competition, expensive accommodation, and health risks, are varied and complex and it is essential to adopt reasonable measures to solve them.
  • namely 列举总结,varied and complex 概括问题性质
ESSAY 2 · 完整范文 · 城市问题 +

There is a widespread phenomenon that young individuals are facing an increasing number of challenges imposed by the continuous expansion of major cities. This essay will elaborate on these challenges and the solutions to them.

It's observed that the young experience fierce competition in the labor market. As there are more and more talented people in the market, companies have more options. Unfortunately, this means these job-hunters are under the pressure of unemployment. To address this, firstly, the government can encourage self-employment, and, secondly, the job-seekers should improve their competitiveness by taking vocational courses.

Furthermore, the issue of overly expensive accommodation is another significant concern for the young. Whether it's to rent a house or purchase their own properties, or the high price of real estate in metropolitans prevents the youngsters from having a comfortable living environment. To tackle this issue, a number of measures can be taken. Firstly, the government can provide subsidies on renting and buying houses. Secondly, instead of searching houses primarily in the city center, where the house prices are rocketing, the youth can locate less expensive houses in the suburbs. Lastly, young people can utilize the advance in technology such as social media to search for more housing options.

Last but not least, the young are also having health issues that are traditionally considered as "old people" diseases, such as cardiovascular illnesses, and obesity. This poses great hazards on their overall well-being, both physically and psychologically. To solve this, it's crucial for the government to take actions, such as taxing/imposing taxation on chemical industries that cause air pollution and water contamination. Besides, young individuals should keep regular exercise and establish healthy dietary habits.

In conclusion, the issues facing young individuals, namely fierce competition, expensive accommodation, and health risks, are varied and complex and it is essential to adopt reasonable measures to solve them.

PRACTICE · 真题练习

TEACHER · 课堂练习
下方为两道真题,先阅读题干并在笔记框中记录思路,再点击翻牌查看思路提示与词汇支撑。
PRACTICE 1 · 报告类 · 文化与艺术
传统节日消失的问题与措施
In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?
IELTS:October 10th
笔记
PROBLEM · 问题分析
cultural identity diminishing
▸ 点击翻牌查看思路
  • 问题1:cultural identity diminishing — 文化认同感减弱
  • 问题2:spending less on festivals — 节日消费减少,传统产业萎缩
  • 关键词:traditional ↔ modern, local ↔ global
MEASURES · 解决措施
government + media + individuals
▸ 点击翻牌查看思路
  • 措施1:utilize media / social media to publicize — 媒体宣传
  • 措施2:gaming industry breathe life into — 游戏产业赋能传统
  • 措施3:government subsidise — 政府资助
PRACTICE 2 · 报告类 · 广告与媒体
模仿名人行为的原因与问题
Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?
IELTS:November 2nd
笔记
CAUSES · 原因分析
idolize · seek recognition
▸ 点击翻牌查看思路
  • 原因1:idolize sb — 偶像崇拜
  • 原因2:seek recognition — 寻求认同
  • 原因3:a sense of belonging in fan groups — 粉丝群体归属感
  • 原因4:exposed to media — 媒体曝光
PROBLEMS · 问题分析
overspend · mental well-being
▸ 点击翻牌查看思路
  • 问题1:overspend time and money — 过度消费时间与金钱
  • 问题2:mental well-being, stress, anxiety — 心理健康受损

MODEL ESSAYS · 真题范文

TEACHER · 讲解
下方为两道真题的完整考官范文,点击标题展开阅读,注意高分句型与论证逻辑。
MODEL ESSAY 1 · 文化与艺术 · 传统节日消失 +

题目:In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Around the world, many traditional festivals these days are at risk of becoming outdated and irrelevant. In my opinion, this contributes to issues concerning cultural disintegration and should be countered by citizens in concert with governments.

The main issues resulting from abandoning traditional festivals concern culture. More commercial holidays such as Black Friday and Christmas are gaining in popularity which naturally threatens smaller cultural groups and their festivals. For example, in China there are numerous ethnic groups living in remote areas that struggle to preserve their traditions over time as locals learn more about the outside world and leave their hometowns. As these groups disperse further both physically and virtually it will be a challenge for old traditions to persist and the results may impact the stories they hand down through generations, their language, traditional dishes and other aspects of culture.

The optimal remedies for the weakening of traditional cultures are for governments and individuals to actively encourage traditional festivals. Governments can make the greatest difference. For instance, states could fund organizations that aim to promote traditional festivals by staging local events and reaching out to older members of the community. Younger people could likewise attempt to engage more with their roots and connect with the sources of their culture. This occurs to some extent already when traditional festivals are advertised on social media to bring in a wider audience and greater attention.

In conclusion, the loss of traditional festivals is a boon to globalization and injures the cultural identity of various groups. This development must be confronted by locals of their own individual initiative and encouraged by governments.

▸ 高分要点:cultural disintegration / cultural identity 核心概念词;in concert with 协同结构;boon to globalization 因果归因。

MODEL ESSAY 2 · 广告与媒体 · 模仿名人行为 +

题目:Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?

It has become increasingly common for many younger individuals to imitate the fashion sense and general behavior of celebrities. In my opinion, this is because of the commercialization of celebrity lifestyles and can result in polarization in society.

Many younger people now can follow influencers in a way that was not possible in the past. This increased influence has been made possible by the growth of social media, whereby celebrities can post without a traditional media filter and keep their fans informed about their opinions, fashion choices, and lifestyle. Companies have exploited their pervasive media presence to sell their products and services. For instance, the Kardashians are famous for promoting various products and incorporating corporate interests seamlessly into their daily lives. The imitation of these influencers is therefore a direct consequence of a natural human attraction to the advice of successful, attractive individuals coupled with a global consumerist society.

The problems caused relate to divides in society. In past generations, citizens were more influenced by people in their general vicinity and less by individuals from other countries or in popular media. Today, there is a greater chance that within any given community there will be individuals attracted to sports stars, K-Pop idols, American movie stars, well-known entrepreneurs, and so on. Though this diversity has its benefits, it can also lead to fractures in the social fabric. For instance, a young person who struggles to make friends may be attracted to extremist views online. They may at some point become alienated from mainstream or traditional society if they find acceptance in racist, prejudiced or controversial groups, and imitate the famous individuals taking advantage of their vulnerabilities.

In conclusion, the rise of media and corporate globalization allows the general citizenry to imitate famous people easily these days. Though this is not always a negative, it can lead to dangerous and polarizing behavior among younger generations.

▸ 高分要点:commercialization / polarization 抽象名词引出论点;fractures in the social fabric 隐喻表达;coupled with 并列结构。

PART 03

【报告类】词汇表

4 大分类 · 23 精选词条(点击卡片翻转查看例句,或切换列表模式)

PART 04

基础段 · 复习

小作文常用语料 + 大作文题型结构与重点(点击卡片展开)

TASK 1 · 小作文重点及常用语料

动态图(折线/柱状/饼图) · 重点:时间、趋势
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上升 increase, climb up, skyrocket, jump to, rise, bounce to
下降 decrease, climb down, decline, fall, drop, plummet, dive
到达顶峰 peak at, reach a peak at
回落低点 reach a low point at, bottom out at
占据(百分比) account for, constitute, form, make up, take up
静态图(对比不同品类) · 重点:分类
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领先 / 排名第一 lead (eg. The USA led all countries in 2020.), 形容词最高级, dominant, predominant
相等 / 相似 be similar to, be the same as, equal to
倍数表达 double, triple, two times bigger than
最小 形容词最高级, the minimum
跟随 / 落后 follow behind, lag behind
流程图(生产过程/工作流程) · 重点:流程、图片细节
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开始 At first, at the initial stage, Initially; originate at, initiate at, begin with, commence at
Stage = phase = step
接着 At the next stage, Following that, After that, ...before doing...
eg. The children ate their breakfast before going to school.
eg. The cement was ground before being packaged.
最终 In the end, Finally, Eventually, at the final stage, At last, end with...
示例金句 The cement production begins with the collection of raw materials and ends with cement being packaged.
地图(地理变化/基础设施对比) · 重点:变化
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扩建 / 增加 add, with the addition of..., extend, expand, enlarge
eg. This place increased in size with the addition of an amusement park.
拆除 demolish, with the demolition of..., remove, be off the map
eg. This place decreased in size with the demolition of an amusement park.
改建 rebuild, develop into, convert to, transform to, change into, replace by
路线 road, main road, highway, railway, route; link to, connect, conjoin, intersect with, intersection
eg. This road runs/extends from the north-west through the village to the south-east.
eg. One road runs from the south-west to the north-east, intersecting a village.

TASK 2 · 大作文重点及常用语料

观点类(同意与否) · 重点:审题
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题干特征 agree or disagree | statement
核心策略 明确立场,给出2-3个支撑理由,可让步但须回扣主论点
利弊分析 · 重点:具体化
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题干特征 advantages/benefits or disadvantages/consequences; outweigh...
引出句型 This essay will analyze the potential benefits and consequences before giving my opinion that...
双边讨论 · 重点:审题,两边
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题干特征 discuss both sides and give your own opinion
核心策略 必须两方都讨论,不可偏废;给出自己观点时需有支撑
报告类(解决问题/提出建议) · 重点:根本/主要
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题干特征 reasons/problems; measures/methods/solutions
核心策略 分析根本原因/主要问题,提出对应措施;措施要具体可行
本讲重点 两种写法:①原因措施各自成段 ②每段问题+措施对应

STRUCTURE · 大作文通用结构

大作文三段式结构速览 +

第一段 · 引言改写题目 + 表明立场/概括文章内容

主体段(2-3段)每段一个核心论点,Topic Sentence + 解释 + 举例 + 回扣

结论段重申观点,总结要点,不做新论述

PART 01

小作文 · 流程图

地热能发电流程图 · 范文分步揭示(点击"下一步"逐段展开)

TASK 1 · 题目说明

The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
来源:Cambridge IELTS Academic 12

笔记
Geothermal Power Plant Diagram
TEACHER · 讲解
流程图写作要点:5个阶段,注意使用 begins with / from there / in the stage that follows / the process ends 等连接词。点击"下一步"逐段揭示范文。
STEP 1 · INTRODUCTION · 引言段
The diagram shows that there are five main stages in the production of electricity through the use of geothermal energy.
要点:一句话概括——5个主要阶段(five main stages),点明主题(geothermal energy → electricity)。
STEP 2 · STAGES 1-2 · 注水与地热区
The process begins with cold water being pumped from the surface of the earth down into a 4.5 kilometer-deep injection well. From there, it is transferred to the geothermal zone, a subterranean region composed of hot rocks, before reaching the production well, which is a vertical pipe similar to the injection well but a bit wider.
要点:The process begins with 开启流程;From there 承接;before 从句表达先后;but a bit wider 做比较。
STEP 3 · STAGES 3-5 · 冷凝·发电·输电
In the stage that follows, the hot water is pumped up through the production well into a condenser on the surface where it is converted into steam, following which it is used to power a turbine and rotate it. This turbine is connected to an electricity generator which, when rotated by the turbine, produces electricity. The process ends when the electricity generated by the generator is transferred to the power grid for consumption by end users.
要点:In the stage that follows 衔接第三阶段;where / following which / when rotated by 三种从句交替使用;The process ends 收束全文。
REVIEW · 流程图连接词速览 +
  • 开始:The process begins with... / originates at... / commences at...
  • 承接:From there, / In the stage that follows, / Following that, / After that,
  • 从句衔接:before doing... / where... / following which... / when...
  • 结束:The process ends when... / ends with...
  • 比较:similar to... / but a bit wider / compared to...
PART 02

大作文 · 犯罪与安全

2 道观点类真题 · 点击翻牌查看论点与思路

TOPIC 1 · 利弊分析
电视直播刑事审判——利大于弊?
In some countries, the criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
笔记
TEACHER · 审题
题型:利弊分析(advantages outweigh disadvantages)。需要讨论直播审判的好处与坏处,并明确表态利是否大于弊。核心词汇:criminal trials / live broadcasting / transparency / dignity
ADVANTAGES · 利
透明司法 · 教育公众
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 司法透明:public can supervise judicial processes
  • 震慑犯罪:deter potential criminals by showing consequences
  • 普法教育:raise legal awareness among citizens
  • 监督公正:prevent judicial corruption / bias
DISADVANTAGES · 弊
侵犯隐私 · 模仿犯罪
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 失去尊严:defendants lose dignity, suffer social stigma
  • 毁坏名誉:ruin reputation before verdict
  • 模仿行为:imitate criminal behavior, arouse impulses
  • 不良影响:adverse effects on young viewers
  • 侵犯人权:violation of human rights / privacy
TEACHER · 立场建议
推荐立场:弊大于利(disadvantages outweigh advantages)。虽然直播有透明度优势,但对被告尊严、名誉的损害以及可能引发的模仿犯罪问题更严重。可让步"透明度有价值"但回扣"应以保护人权为前提"。
TOPIC 2 · 同意与否
警察带枪会导致更高犯罪率?
Some people think that if a police force carries a gun, it can lead to higher level of crime in that society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
笔记
TEACHER · 审题
题型:同意与否(agree or disagree)。题目观点是"警察带枪→犯罪率升高"。推荐不同意:警察带枪反而能震慑犯罪、维护公共安全。核心词汇:deter crimes / public security / abuse of guns / potential criminals
DISAGREE · 不同意
带枪震慑犯罪 · 维护安全
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 震慑:deter potential criminals from committing crimes
  • 快速反应:put an end to chaos efficiently
  • 保护公众:protect victims and witnesses
  • 维护秩序:maintain public security / stable society
  • 对比:unarmed police face higher risks from armed criminals
CONCESSION · 让步
滥用风险 · 但可控
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 让步:abuse of guns may occur in rare cases
  • 回扣:strict training & regulations can minimize risks
  • 对比:benefits of deterrence far outweigh rare abuse
  • 结论:armed police → lower crime rate, safer society
WRITING TIPS · 观点类写作技巧 +
  • 立场明确:第一段末尾必须表态,如 I completely disagree with this view
  • 主体段结构:Topic Sentence → 解释 → 举例 → 回扣论点
  • 让步段:Admittedly / While it is true that... 引入,随后用 However / Nevertheless 回扣
  • 同义替换:crimes → offences / violations; criminals → offenders / lawbreakers
  • 核心搭配:deter crimes, commit offences, serve sentences, rehabilitate, public security
PART 03

【犯罪与安全】词汇表

4 大分类 · 27 精选词条(点击卡片翻转查看例句,或切换列表模式)

PART 01

小作文 · 地图题

村庄变迁地图(1986 - present)· 范文分步揭示(点击"下一步"逐段展开)

TASK 1 · 题目说明

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1986 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
题型:地图对比题(Map Comparison)· 来源:Cambridge IELTS

笔记
Village Map Comparison 1986 - Present
TEACHER · 写作策略
地图题三种组织方式:按顺序(逐个描述变化)、以"变化"为中心(分类描述不同变化)、以"时间"为中心(分时段对比)。主体段推荐时间中心法:先写 1986 年原貌,再写现在面貌,最后总结变化。
STRATEGY 1
按顺序
逐个描述变化
STRATEGY 2
以"变化"为中心
分类描述变化类型
STRATEGY 3 · 推荐
以"时间"为中心
1986 → 现在对比
TEACHER · 变化类型
地图题核心是描述三种变化,用不同句型表达:
0 → 1
本来没有 X,现在有了
X has been built / developed / added
1 → 0
本来有 Y,现在没了
Y has been removed / demolished / disappeared
1 → 2
本来是 a,现在变成 A
a has been converted into / transformed into A
TEACHER · 主体段结构
主体段推荐结构:In 1986...Currently...One major change is...Another main feature is that...Last but not least...
STEP 1 · INTRODUCTION · 引言段
The given map illustrates the alterations that a village beside the sea underwent from 1986 to the present.
要点:一句话概括——maps illustrate the alterations / changes,点明时间跨度(from 1986 to the present)。
STEP 2 · 1986 DESCRIPTION · 过去面貌
In 1986, to the east side of the River Stoke, a vast farmland stood with shops, a post office and a number of houses along the road. The road ran from the south to the north. There were also gardens with large houses and a primary school alongside the road as well.
要点:stood / ran / There were 用过去时描述 1986 年原貌。方位词 to the east side of / alongside 精确定位。
STEP 3 · PRESENT DESCRIPTION · 现在面貌与变化
Today, the farmland disappears. Instead, a larger number of housing properties are developed, the most notable feature in the second map. Another major change is the extension of more roads, which is still to the east side of the River Stoke. Besides, the shops have been removed but the post office and the bridge on the north still stand. The has been converted into a larger school. Additionally, the gardens in 1986 have been transformed into retirement homes.
要点:现在时 + 被动语态交替使用。disappears(1→0)、are developed(0→1)、have been removed(1→0)、has been converted into / have been transformed into(1→2)覆盖三种变化类型。
STEP 4 · OVERALL SUMMARY · 总结论尾
From an overall perspective, it's readily apparent that the present map shows major redevelopment in the number of housings with extended roads, as well as the disappearance of farmlands which dominated the area shown in 1986.
要点:From an overall perspective / it's readily apparent that 收束全文,概括两大核心变化:住房增加 + 农田消失。
EXAMINER'S ESSAY · 范文2(考官范文 · 下划线为高分表达) +

The maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present moment.

Overall, the town has most notably shown an increase in housing development, which indicates a higher population and a move away from agriculture and farming.

One change that stands out is that there has been a significant redevelopment over the whole period. To the east of the river stoke, housing now dominates the area of what was once farmland. In 1986 there were shops and just a handful of residential properties. Now there are neither shops nor farmland left, although the post office is still there. The bridge over the river stoke still stands as it did in 1986.

Another noticeable change is that more roads have been built around the housing complex. Additionally, the gardens that were in front of the large house in 1986, have been removed and the house has been expanded and converted into a retirement home. The primary school still stands and has been extended in the decades since.

REVIEW · 地图题核心句型速览 +
  • 引言:The maps illustrate the changes which have taken place in... from... to...
  • 总结:Overall, ... has most notably shown an increase in... / From an overall perspective, it's readily apparent that...
  • 新增(0→1):X has been built / developed / added / constructed
  • 消失(1→0):Y has been removed / demolished / replaced / disappeared
  • 转变(1→2):A has been converted into / transformed into / replaced by B
  • 保留:The bridge still stands as it did in 1986 / The school still remains
  • 方位词:to the east of / alongside / in front of / adjacent to / in the vicinity of
  • 连接词:Additionally / Besides / Another noticeable change is that / One change that stands out is that
PART 02

大作文 · 城市交通企业

2 道观点类真题 · 点击翻牌查看论点 · 展开查看考官范文

TOPIC 1 · 同意与否
将大公司迁往郊区能否解决交通与住房问题?
Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
笔记
TEACHER · 审题
题型:同意与否(agree or disagree)。题目观点是"迁往郊区→解决交通+住房两大问题"。推荐完全同意:从减少通勤车辆、降低住房需求两个维度论证。核心词汇:traffic congestion / housing shortage / relocate / rush hours / commuting
AGREE · 同意
减少交通拥堵 · 缓解住房压力
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 交通:减少员工私家车上路,尤其高峰期 rush hours
  • 交通:员工搬到农村居住,休闲出行也减少
  • 交通:办公用品与工厂产品的运输量下降
  • 住房:大量员工搬迁,城市住房供给增加
  • 住房:有助于缓解 housing bubble 房地产泡沫
DISAGREE · 反面思路
城市·个人·企业三方成本
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 城市:人员外流,不利于城市消费与发展
  • 个人:通勤时间变长,难以平衡工作与家庭
  • 个人:交通成本反而增加
  • 企业:商业合作便利性下降,竞争力减弱
  • 企业:为靠近客户与人才,仍倾向留在城市
MODEL ESSAY · 范文1(274 words · 加粗为核心词汇) +

The rapidly growing populations and car ownership have caused frequent traffic congestion and housing shortages in major cities. Some people think that the traffic and housing problems can be solved by relocating large companies and factories in these cities to rural areas. I completely agree with this view.

Employees commuting by car is an important contributing factor to traffic congestion in urban areas. Moving large companies and factories to rural areas can significantly reduce the number of company and factory employees' private vehicles on city streets, especially during rush hours. The amount of leisure-related traffic will also decline because many employees will relocate to the countryside to live closer to their workplace. Another benefit is that the amount of traffic caused by the transport of office supplies and factory products is also likely to fall if large companies and factories are moved to rural areas.

Moving large companies and factories to the countryside also helps to solve housing problems in cities. In urban areas, a high percentage of housing is owned or rented by employees of large companies and factories and their families. Moving these firms and factories to the countryside is likely to lead to the relocation of their employees. This means that more accommodation would become available to other residents of large cities, and would help to reduce the housing bubble in many large cities.

For these reasons, I agree that moving large companies and factories from major cities to the countryside can significantly reduce commuting and leisure-related traffic, and the demand for accommodation, which would make it an effective solution to the chronic traffic and housing problems in these cities.

274 WORDS
TOPIC 2 · 同意与否
企业是否应承担社会责任?
As well as making money, businesses should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
笔记
TEACHER · 审题
题型:同意与否(agree or disagree)。推荐完全同意。从两个角度论证:(1) 企业对环境的影响远大于个人;(2) 唯利是图会导致人权侵犯。核心词汇:social responsibilities / profits / environmental impact / human rights / maximize profits
AGREE · 论点一
企业环境影响远大于个人
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 影响更大:businesses have much larger impacts upon the world
  • 环保举例:个人减塑 vs 渔业造成 50%+ 海洋塑料污染
  • 结论:企业必须承担环保责任,保护海洋生态
  • 拓展:industrial pollution / carbon emissions
AGREE · 论点二
唯利是图导致人权侵犯
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 廉价劳工:sweatshops / borderline slavery 血汗工厂
  • 利润最大化:maximize profits at the cost of human rights
  • 根本错误:to do so would be fundamentally wrong
  • 结论:企业必须在利润目标之外承担责任
MODEL ESSAY · 范文2(280 words · 加粗为核心词汇) +

Although for most businesses their primary concerns are their profits and the amount of money they are making, many people are calling for businesses to be more aware of their social responsibilities. This essay shall explain why I agree that businesses must prioritize their social responsibilities.

To begin with, businesses have much larger impacts upon the world than individual people and thus should act with an even higher awareness of their social responsibilities. A good example of this is how a business is aware of its environmental impact. Most people around the world are attempting to reduce their use of plastic to prevent any further plastic pollution of the oceans. However, over fifty percent of plastic pollution in the ocean is the direct product of the fishing industry. Therefore, for the protection of marine wildlife it is imperative that fishing industries think not only of their profits but also of their social responsibilities.

Secondly, if a business is only concerned with profits then there is a high risk it shall abuse people's human rights. There are many methods in the world to access very cheap labour in the form of sweatshops and borderline slavery. By using these methods, a business would maximize its profits but to do so would be fundamentally wrong. Therefore, it is clear that a business must have responsibilities to uphold outside of their goal of maximizing profit.

Therefore, to conclude, it is essential that businesses are aware of their social responsibilities. These social responsibilities are what ensure that as a planet we are protecting human rights and our environment. If the only concern of businesses was profit then both humans and wildlife would be grievously harmed.

280 WORDS
WRITING TIPS · 观点类写作技巧 +
  • 立场明确:第一段末尾必须表态,如 I completely agree with this view
  • 主体段结构:Topic Sentence → 解释 → 举例 → 回扣论点
  • 核心搭配:traffic congestion, housing shortage, relocate to, rush hours, social responsibilities, maximize profits
  • 同义替换:companies → firms / businesses / corporations; countryside → rural areas / suburbs
  • 让步句型:Although for most businesses their primary concerns are profits... / While it is true that...
  • 总结句型:For these reasons, I agree that... / Therefore, to conclude, it is essential that...
PART 03

【城市交通企业】词汇表

4 大分类 · 78 精选词条(点击卡片翻转查看例句,或切换列表模式)

PART 04

语料升级练习 · 科技进步与生活

基础表达 → 高级表达(逐步升级)

句子升级示范 +

Level 1:With the development of technology, individuals' life becomes better and better.

Level 2:With the advance of technology, the life quality of individuals becomes higher.

Level 3:The advent of scientific and technological progress has contributed to the improvement of individuals' quality of life. For instance, the rise of artificial intelligence such as ChatGPT and Claude has improved individuals' work efficiency as more and more employees rely on them with repetitive tasks such as replying e-mails, organizing conferences and taking notes.

Level 4:For instance, the rise of text-to-speech tools utilizing artificial intelligence such as ChatGPT and Claude has multiplied employees' work efficiency as these tools can take notes during conferences and convert speeches to texts for later review.

要点:the advent of... 替换 with the development ofmultiply work efficiency 替换 improve work efficiencytext-to-speech tools 给出具体技术实例。

PART 01

Task 1 · 小作文

交通方式数据图表分析(点击图表与范文逐步展开讲解)

QUESTION · 题目

The table shows the percentage of journeys made by different forms of transport in four countries. The bar graph shows the results of a survey into car use in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

笔记

DATA · 点击图表查看讲解

MODEL ESSAY · 范文分步揭示

TEACHER · 讲解
点击下方"下一步"按钮,逐段揭示范文。每段配有写作要点解析,帮助学生理解段落结构与得分点。
STEP 1 · INTRODUCTION · 开头段
The table compares modes of transport used in four countries: Canada, Belgium, Germany and the Netherlands. The percentage of journeys made by car, bicycle, public transport and on foot is given. The bar chart shows the results of a survey into reasons people in Canada travel to work by car.
要点:改写题目,介绍两个图表的内容,用 compares / shows 替换原题动词,避免照抄。
STEP 2 · OVERVIEW (TABLE) · 表格概述
As can be seen from the table, cars are the most frequently used form of transport in all four countries. However, the proportion of journeys made by car ranges from a low of 47 per cent in the Netherlands to a high of 90 per cent in Canada. Figures for the other forms of transport also varies considerably. Not surprisingly, in the Netherlands, a high proportion of trips were made by bicycle (26%) and on foot (18%). The highest rate of public transport use is in Germany, where nearly one in five journeys is made by public transport.
要点:先点出总体趋势(汽车主导),再用 ranges from...to... 给数据区间,突出荷兰与加拿大的极端对比。
STEP 3 · DETAIL (BAR CHART) · 条形图细节
The bar chart provides information that may help explain why car use in Canada. The most frequently cited reason is lack of any other alternative (38%). Although a sizable percentage says it is more convenient (22%), the other listed factors appear to relate more to need than preference, e.g. working night shift.
要点:用 Although... the other factors appear to... 体现数据归纳能力,不只罗列数字而做因果判断。
STEP 4 · CONCLUSION · 总结段
Overall, the figures show considerable variation in modes of transport used, though the car continues to dominate in most contexts.
要点:用 Overall 引导总结,considerable variation 概括差异,though 做让步,体现客观性。
STEP 5 · REVIEW · 写作复盘
本篇得分要点回顾:
① 任务完成度:两个图表均覆盖,主要特征与对比均呈现
② 连贯衔接:段落分明,使用 As can be seen / However / Overall 等衔接词
③ 词汇多样性:ranges from / considerable variation / sizable percentage / cited reason
④ 语法多样性:让步状语从句、定语从句、被动语态交替使用
PART 02

Task 2 · 大作文

教育主题话题卡片(点击翻牌查看观点论据)

TOPIC 8 · AGREE / DISAGREE
政府应不应该给科学教育投资更多资金
Some people think government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
笔记
TEACHER · 讲解
这是一个 Agree/Disagree 题型。点击下方卡片翻面,查看"同意"与"不同意"两方观点与论据。课堂上可先让学生 brainstorm,再翻牌对比。
VIEW A · 同意
科学教育应获更多投资
▸ 点击翻牌查看论据
  • 科学驱动技术创新与国家竞争力
  • STEM 人才缺口大,需重点培养
  • an investment in human capital
  • a more educated workforce
  • hinder innovation 若不投资
VIEW B · 不同意
各学科应均衡发展
▸ 点击翻牌查看论据
  • 社会科学同样重要(人文素养)
  • well-rounded education 全面教育
  • 过度倾斜可能 stifle creativity
  • overly strict focus 限制视野
  • 教育公平 educational equity 受损
TOPIC 24 · DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS
孩子该不该送去托儿中心
Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for children, while others think family members like grandparents can do it better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
笔记
TEACHER · 讲解
Discuss both views 题型,需客观讨论两方后给出自己立场。点击翻牌查看托儿中心 vs 家庭成员的对比论据。
VIEW A · 托儿中心
Childcare Centers 更优
▸ 点击翻牌查看论据
  • 专业教育者 professional staff
  • a play-centred approach 游戏化教学
  • foster creativity 培养创造力
  • stimulate imagination 激发想象
  • build social skills 社交能力
VIEW B · 家庭成员
Grandparents 更好
▸ 点击翻牌查看论据
  • 情感纽带更紧密 emotional bond
  • instill a sense of responsibility
  • cultural expectations 文化传承
  • 一对一关注 more attention
  • 灵活性 flexibility in timetable

MIND MAP · 教育话题思维导图

TEACHER · 讲解
下方为教育主题的四轴思维导图(教育主体 / 方法论 / 价值目标 / 矛盾关系)。点击"放大查看"可全屏浏览,帮助学生构建论述框架。
教育主题思维导图
PART 03

【教育】词汇表

11 大分类 · 93 精选词条(点击卡片翻转查看例句,或切换列表模式)

PART 01

小作文 · 流程图

砖块制造流程图(Brick Manufacturing)· 范文分步揭示(点击"下一步"逐段展开)

TASK 1 · 题目说明

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
题型:流程图(Process Diagram)· 来源:Cambridge IELTS

笔记
Brick Manufacturing Process Diagram
TEACHER · 写作策略
流程图写作要点:10个阶段,注意使用 begins when / followed by / after which / in the next stage / following that / eventually 等连接词。注意被动语态的运用:clay is dug out / is carried by / are added / are dried / are heated
STEP 1 · INTRODUCTION · 引言段
The picture illustrates how bricks are produced.
要点:一句话概括——bricks are produced。流程图引言可极简,点明主题即可。
STEP 2 · MAIN STAGES · 主要流程(1-7阶段)
The process begins when clay is dug out through the use of a digger, which is followed by clay passing through a metal grid. Fine clay is then carried by a roller after which sand and water are added to it. In the next stage, either this mixture is pressed through a frame and cut into bricks using a wire cutter, or it is put into moulds and formed into bricks. Following that, the bricks are dried in a drying oven for one to two days.
要点:begins when 开启;followed by 承接;after which 引导从句;In the next stage 衔接;either...or... 表达分支选择;Following that 继续推进。全程被动语态。
STEP 3 · LATER STAGES & SUMMARY · 后续阶段与总结(8-10阶段)
The next three stages involve two kilns connected to a cooling chamber. The dried bricks are first heated from 200 to 980 degrees centigrade, before being exposed to high temperature (870 to 1300 degrees). They are then cooled within 48 to 72 hours. Eventually, they are packed and delivered to customers by trucks.

Overall, the procedure of producing bricks is comprised of ten stages which are rather simple.
要点:involve 概括三个阶段;before being exposed 用 before + 动名词衔接;Eventually 收束;总结段概括 ten stages + rather simple。
REVIEW · 流程图连接词速览 +
  • 开始:The process begins when... / begins with... / originates at...
  • 承接:followed by... / after which... / in the next stage... / following that...
  • 分支:either...or... / alternatively...
  • 结束:Eventually,... / Finally,... / The process ends when...
  • 被动语态:is dug out / is carried by / are added to / are dried / are heated / are cooled / are packed
  • 概括:The next three stages involve... / is comprised of... stages
PART 02

大作文 · 广告媒体

3 道观点类真题 · 点击翻牌查看论点与思路

TEACHER · 话题维度
广告媒体类话题可从以下4个维度展开:
DIMENSION 1
广告/科技的影响
DIMENSION 2
对传统的冲击
DIMENSION 3
信息的来源、分发渠道
DIMENSION 4
消费者/观众 = 受众
TOPIC 16 · 利弊分析
广告的影响是积极还是消极的?
We are surrounded by all kinds of advertising, which significantly influence our lives. Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects?
笔记
TEACHER · 审题
题型:利弊分析(positive effects outweigh negative effects)。需讨论广告的积极与消极影响,并明确表态。核心词汇:mislead consumers / spending binge / informative / consumer choice / materialism
POSITIVE · 积极影响
信息传递 · 促进消费选择
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 信息传递:informative ads help consumers make informed choices
  • 促进竞争:encourage business rivalry, leading to better products
  • 经济增长:drive consumption and support media industries
  • 公益宣传:public service ads raise awareness of social issues
NEGATIVE · 消极影响
误导消费 · 物质主义
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 误导:misrepresent products, mislead consumers
  • 乱消费:trigger a spending binge among susceptible buyers
  • 物质主义:promote materialism, undermine self-esteem
  • 不合适内容:expose children to inappropriate content
  • 虚假信息:groundless claims, exaggeration
TOPIC 17 · 同意与否
广告是否阻碍人们追求个性?
Advertising discourages us from being different individuals by making us want to be and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
笔记
TEACHER · 审题
题型:同意与否(agree or disagree)。题目观点是"广告→让人趋同→阻碍个性"。推荐同意:广告塑造统一审美、推广同质化产品。核心词汇:individualism / following the same pattern / cater to / stunt / materialism
AGREE · 同意
塑造统一审美 · 推广同质化
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 统一审美:promote a single standard of beauty / success
  • 千篇一律:following the same pattern in fashion and lifestyle
  • 从众心理:cater to mass tastes, discourage individuality
  • 品牌崇拜:brand worship replaces personal preference
CONCESSION · 让步
广告也提供选择 · 但有限
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 让步:ads do offer a variety of product choices
  • 回扣:but choices are within a narrow, commercialized range
  • 本质:ads define what is "desirable," limiting true individuality
  • 结论:advertising largely discourages genuine individualism
TOPIC 19 · 同意与否
印刷媒体该被淘汰吗?
More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books magazines and newspapers on paper. To what extent you agree or disagree?
笔记
TEACHER · 审题
题型:同意与否(agree or disagree)。题目观点是"电子设备普及→印刷媒体无存在必要"。推荐不同意:印刷媒体仍有独特价值。核心词汇:offline readers / online readers / timeliness / traditional media / audio-visual / current affairs
DISAGREE · 不同意
印刷媒体仍有独特价值
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 触感体验:offline readers value the tactile experience of print
  • 深度阅读:printed books encourage focused, deep reading
  • 权威性:print media often upholds rigorous journalism standards
  • 收藏价值:printed materials have cultural and收藏 value
  • 数字鸿沟:not everyone has easy access to digital devices
CONCESSION · 让步
数字媒体优势明显 · 但非替代
▸ 点击翻牌查看论点
  • 让步:digital media offers timeliness and easy access
  • 让步:audio-visual information enhances the experience
  • 回扣:but digital and print serve complementary roles
  • 结论:print media should coexist with digital, not be replaced
WRITING TIPS · 广告媒体类写作技巧 +
  • 立场明确:第一段末尾必须表态,如 I completely agree / disagree with this view
  • 主体段结构:Topic Sentence → 解释 → 举例 → 回扣论点
  • 核心搭配:mislead consumers, spending binge, be susceptible to, cater to, following the same pattern, timeliness
  • 同义替换:advertising → commercials / promotional messages; consumers → buyers / the populace
  • 让步句型:While it is true that... / Admittedly... / Although digital media offers...
  • 总结句型:For these reasons... / Therefore, to conclude... / In conclusion, print media should coexist with...
PART 03

【广告与媒体】词汇表

3 大分类 · 59 精选词条(点击卡片翻转查看例句,或切换列表模式)